kya baat hai ....har line per wah wah kehne ka dil kerta hai ...zindgi ki haqeqat ko behtareen dhang se bayaan kiya hai aapne ... kuch dost dekhte hein mujhey bheegi nazar se bita loon main unke beech ek shaam zara ruk .... bahut khoob .......all the best and keep writing.....
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kya baat hai ....har line per wah wah kehne ka dil kerta hai ...zindgi ki haqeqat ko behtareen dhang se bayaan kiya hai aapne ...
kuch dost dekhte hein mujhey bheegi nazar se
bita loon main unke beech ek shaam zara ruk ....
bahut khoob .......all the best and keep writing.....
shivani jee jara ruk meri apnee kavita nahee thee. aapka comment mai iskee lekhika tak pahucha dunga.
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nice..
bahuttttttttttt achhi
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